Feedback

Below is our feedback from Hannah, I have to agree with what she says. I think are visualisation of somebody walking over the grass is far too literal. I also believe that it is very boring and won't engage people to interact with it. I agree with Hannah that if it was on the portal it wouldn't make it very easy to relate with. I believe that they should be seeing an interactive with it at the same time. Another thing disappointed me was the fact we had done the research but that didn't come out in the presentation. I also believe that Ian input is the presentation damaged it rather and then helped it. He undermined Gaston Bachelard by calling him a French bloke. I don't believe this went down very well and does not show any professional courtesy.